Second Gate: Chapter Twenty-Three
I do try to keep my chapters roughly the same length. I find it helps the reader’s flow and be able to allot a certain amount of time each day without being surprised.
Every so often, I fail rather miserably, like with Chapter Twenty-Three, which is nearly twice as long as the previous chapter.
But hey, you get more Dewin in the deal. And I’m told he’s a pretty nifty character. And you learn a bit more about him and how he has this somewhat irritating tendency to be in the right place at the right time. And you get a shadowy character that doesn’t seem to be at all pleasant to be around. And he seems awfully smug about it too.
This, I am led to believe, is good.
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