Second Gate: Chapter Twelve
And Chapter Twelve is now live.
An interesting note for this particular chapter; it was initially meant to be two separate chapters… hence why this chapter is a bit longer than the others previous (12 pages as opposed to 7 or 8). But as I was actually putting the manuscript together, there really wasn’t any logical break point that worked for me.
Along with my reluctance to add superfluous content in order to make the two individual chapters meet the length I had decided the pages should be… I erred on the side of one larger chapter.
See ya next week.
TKO Creations 
May 25, 2010 at 8:25 am
Just want to say what a great blog you got here!
I’ve been around for quite a lot of time, but finally decided to show my appreciation of your work!
Thumbs up, and keep it going!
Cheers
Christian, iwspo.net
June 9, 2010 at 2:05 am
No superfluous content? What kind of hack job is this? Even now that you’ve had the perfect opportunity, not ONCE has Rumil stopped to contemplate her features in a mirror, or share the details of the embroidery on her hemlines. How are her fans supposed to make accurate reproductions of her wardrobe without this information? You clearly know NOTHING of what good writing is all about, sir!